Best advice I’ve ever had re writing dialogue from N.Z. mentor and Director of NZSA many years Joan Rossier Jones has stayed with me. MAKE IT REAL, RELEVANT and REVEALING. I have used and enlarged on that in my Dynamic Dialogue international workshops for past 30 years. First in Aus. for T.W. 2005 or 6 I believe through Eve and Arts Nexus. Even today there is much of value in a skeleton outline of it continually offered to interested members as a half hour talk with handouts. Certainly some tips and traps because writing dialogue can be a dicey minefield for any of us, believe me. Hzl